Pain Slut - Comments

Wow, this was amazing. I don't know what to say other than wow, you are brilliant. I love your writing, and I just... it's like I want more. Wow.

This was amazing. Omg...I swear I love your writing. It's one of the best in my opinion. I especially loved the dialogue. Matt was super stern which I love. Mmmm! You captured the topic of my contest for sure.

She really tried to leave him and be the dominate one before she left him for good but Matt is one too strong and oozes dominance so the victor is Matt but at least she was able to tie him to the bed tho I give her props on tht one anyhoo I enjoy this sexfied one shot girl :)

Well, I'm totally not surprised at how fucking awesome this is!! All of those one shots seriously paid off; this was epic. I felt for her, she tried, but Matt and his crazy horsecock prevailed!!! Can't say I blame her for caving! I mean, really...WOW! I'm entered in this contest too and we pretty much got the same confession, but I know mine won't even come close to this good!*Sigh* your writing is amazing!

Oh my gosh! This was awesome!! You need to win!

i had it read to me by the writter! although she giggled true it....it was AMAZING! better put together than any smut writing i've ever seen!!! it totally captivated me! told the entire relationship between them in just this one situation!!!

oh damn when the beast shattered the headboard of the bed I almost fell off my chair
her plan really backfired on her- but damn!!
being addicted to each other in that way must be draining.. and the fact that he just up and left like that- no cute cuddling or anything.. fit the story like a glove!

You totally rock girl!!

Holy macaroni woman...angry tied up Matt equals sexy as fuck Matt...

In all seriousness though, I really loved it! Not only was it super hot, but you were extremely creative with your choice of direction to take the story in. Especially adding in the masochistic side to it, which you wrote really well, rather than just re-writing the confession in a story, so kudos for you!

Also, the ending was probably my favourite part, how it wasn't like some where they fall asleep together or they end up falling in love, it was just Matt leaving and her coming to the realization, hey he doesn't love her that way.

I really enjoyed reading your entry hun and thank you for your promptness in getting the entry in so I can judge them all on the closing day. Great job! -ZV

Damn this was hot but I feel sorry for Charlotte too that Matt is such a sadistic bastard. I wasn't expecting him to break the headboard apart to get free but he isn't the Hulk for no reason.

Good luck in the contest hun :-)

I loved it! That was really hot but I do feel bad for Charlette though. Great job and good luck. I don't think my entry will be close to as good as this :)