April 24th, 2014 at 03:34am
Punch Drunk Love - Comments
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So glad to see a update :) this story gets funnier and greater with each update :)April 16th, 2014 at 08:21pm
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Really glad you updated. Was missing reading this story.April 15th, 2014 at 03:52pm
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I am so happy you updated. I love how badass Charlie is. I can't wait for the next chapter :DJanuary 21st, 2014 at 04:25am
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I am so happy you updated. I love how badass Charlie is. I can't wait for the next chapter :DJanuary 21st, 2014 at 04:25am
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Yay!!! Very cute. As always, I enjoyed it and am looking forward to the next chapter. (:January 21st, 2014 at 12:32am
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That was a great chapter. I couldn't stop laughing pretty much the entire way through. Can't wait for more.January 21st, 2014 at 12:22am
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Omg I love this! Please continue! I love how much of a badass she is, but I hope there is a twist with her at some point.November 21st, 2013 at 07:22am
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Glad you're back. I really like this storyNovember 11th, 2013 at 10:11pm
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Yay!! So glad you're back! Charlie must have some really lovely knockers.November 11th, 2013 at 05:32am
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Nudie magazines hahahahaha
This was a good chapter. Update again soon plsNovember 10th, 2013 at 09:13pm -
Come back! :)July 27th, 2013 at 04:25pm
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Star wars dream :)
Love the chapter. Charlie is awesome and embarrassed Alex is adorable :P I'm not sure yet how much bad news charlie is, but I'm pretty sure Alex is going to end up with a broken heart though.July 9th, 2013 at 09:33pm -
Charlie is such a character! I just hope Jack isn't right about her, I hope she's got a soft side that she's willing to show Alex. Maybe he'll bring it out. Can't wait for more!June 23rd, 2013 at 05:59am
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i love how you have an intense chapter then right after have a cutesy scene; its a great mix! I also love how Jack comes over for the sole fact of eating Alex's food; i find that hilarious haha. on the other hand, i think you should put some more zack and rian in the story; i miss the other boys! anyway, update soon; im loving it all <3.June 23rd, 2013 at 03:29am
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absolutely fantastic! update soon <3June 23rd, 2013 at 01:37am
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I'm really diggin this story. Don't make Jack act like a buttcrack to Charlie. I like her.June 22nd, 2013 at 09:32am
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I'm hoping that they get together. I like the way they joke around. Keen for the next update.June 22nd, 2013 at 08:31am
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Yay yay yay love this shit! Charlie is such a bold firecracker!June 22nd, 2013 at 07:21am
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the whole title of the story now suddenly makes a lot of sense after reading the first chapter. I must say I really love Charlie's character and her name. So many ATL fanfic writers make these very dainty, cute characters but you have such a pretty, enticing, rough character that I simply adore. Great job on the characters .
I also love your descriptions. They flow together so nicely but in no way overwhelm the reader. I read so many stories that are so packed with details you don't even know what the plot is actually. On the other side of the spectrum, I read stories that have 0 details and you have the perfect inbetween great job with that .
In addition, I adore that this is in Alex's P.O.V. I never see any stories that have the boy is telling the story instead of the other way around. Plus, you get more of Charile's iciness but having it in his POV instead.
I also love how you got the relationship with all the boys in the third chapter because its really accurate to how they are in real life :). And I love how you know all the parents' names and correct dogs' names; woot for a mutual obsessive all time low fan haha! I'd love to see more chapters such as this.
I'm so glad the date went well... and ended well ;D.
Anyways, great story; please update soon!June 21st, 2013 at 08:58pm
I get this feeling that Charlie is secretly a train wreck... Like she's going to bail on Alex because she's too scared for a relationship or something. I just get that vibe from her...