Whiskey - Comments

Oh man poor Zacky I figure he would crack I mean it's either be killed or get ur best friend killed, I just hope tht Brian and Tyler makes it out before Matt or Nick gets there, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Bloody Hell?!? Now Matt knows where they are! I don't entirely blame Zacky cos he's under immense pressure. However, I didn't think he'd stab Bri in the back like that. Hope Bri and Tyler can avoid Matt and Nick and be safe.

Please update again soon xx

Love Johnny in this. He's the only one with a brain, it seems.

So Matt knows where they are now! Hope they get out of there before he finds them again!!
Waiting for next time!!

First off, Tyler, you're a complete moron for telling Zacky where you are when he called in the last chapter. He didn't ask. If you had kept your damn mouth shut, he wouldn't have been able to give you away. I knew that would come back to bite you and I was right.

Second, Zacky, you pussy little bitch. I can't believe you did that. Seriously? Why even try to help Brian if you're going to turn around and stab him in the back? Ugh.

I everyone Brian trusts going to screw him? *pets him*

Johnny ur fucking awesome I love u, thank u for knocking some common sense into Zacky, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Love Johnny literally beating some sense into Zacky! That was awesome. :)

But you broke my heart with Brian crying in the shower. Into little, bitty pieces. :(

This really is getting deep now. I wonder how they are gonna get out of this without harm. Please update again soon xx

Jimmy sweetie I understand tht it's hard to kno tht u lost ur sister to the two people tht u thought were ur best friends but right now u "staying out of it" can cause unnecessary deaths if u don't get ur butt into gear and stop Matt from goin mad and from Brian from being hunted but u just sittin there not doin anything will lead to Zacky, Tyler, and Johnny to gettin killed becuz ur lack of support, u need remind Matt tht he is to blame for the death as well and tht if he kills Brian thn u r goin to have to kill him so I think tht u need to stop moping around and start takin action can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Awwww, Jimmy. I get it, I really do, but your trying to "stay out of things" contributed to where they are today. If you "stay out of things" any more, then all your friends are going to end up dead. It's time to man up and take a stand. Keep at him, Johnny!

I thought tht son of a bitch left but damn it he is back what the he did he do stalk them can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

So, as if things weren't complicated enough, Nick's back!

Loving this. Can't wait for the next part xx

Things really are out of hand. I can't believe Matt hired a sniper to kill Zacky. I really hope things get better soon without anyone being killed or seriously injured. Looking forward to the next part xx

Well shit Matt has officially lost his marbles like u hired a sniper to kill ur friend if he doesn't tell u where Brian is like what the hell Matt seriously and what is Jimmy talkin about can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Just when I think Matt can't get any crazier... Zacky should actually try to talk to the "sniper" across the street. Odds are that he has no idea how insane Matt is and, if he knew, he wouldn't want any part of the arrangement. Even hired killers have standards usually.

The other thing Zacky needs to do is to go talk to Jimmy now. Once Jimmy knows that Matt is threatening more of his friends, maybe he'll crack. He might see the Kenzie thing as just between Matt and Brian, but threatening Zacky too is above and beyond all that.

Sneaky bastard Brian can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

I absolutely love Zacky in this. I think he's my favorite character. And this line...

<i>Now I’d fuckin’ love to. I’d absolutely love to keep her out of harm’s way so you could run head-on at Matt like the jackass you are</i>

... cracked me up. Though I have to say, cock-blocking Brian like that was pretty rude. If he has to keep Tyler with him, they might as well have a good time. That'd sure be my motto if I was stuck in a hotel room with Brian!!

Shit is gettin too real man can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

whoa this is soooooo good when i read matt hit kenzie and i read how he was acting with brian it surprised me but not so much and now this tyler girl in the mix when she doesnt even know why matt wants brian dead and im gonna say this i think you should do like a prequel sequel thing so we can see the before matt wanted to kill brian and kenzie killing herself but i really hope that zack figures something out

Brian's problems always seem to go from bad to worse .... lol

Hope you can update again soon xx

@MoMo_92 I agree completely. Once I found out Matt hit Kenzie, Brian was completely off the hook in my book. The fault lies with Matt for hitting her and with her for not being strong enough to walk away. Brian may be a massive douche for sleeping with his best friend's girl, but to my way of thinking he has exactly 0% of the blame in her death.