Ride - Comments

pretty please update soon <3 its so lovely

I like this chapter. ^~^

I love this. I hope it gets updated soon.

This is my first time reading your story on my computer, (normally I do it on my iPhone), and I must say I love your layout! It's so creative and beautiful ug I love it.
Cute chapter^^ Tom needs to back off >.< I don't think Eloise is using Oli okay! But aw Oli made a nickname for her, that's so cute.
Great chapter by the way, and good luck at school! I start on September 3rd and I'll be a sophomore, so I still have some time left. But don't stress about updates, just get them in whenever you can; I won't complain:)

Aw you mentioned me and called me a doughnut, that's so sweet!^^
I actually really liked this chapter! It wasn't pointless at all! It shows how Eloise is gettig closer to Oli and how she is getting more comfortable with Matt. It was so cute and I couldn't stop smiling like an idiot through the whole thing:3
Like I said before, I really like the way you write the dialogue for Matt and Oli. It's adorable and it brings character. :)

Well, now I want doughnuts. Thanks a lot :P

I love this story!!!!! Please Sunday come soon!!!

I really really like this story. I mean, you write the characters so well, they all have personality. I also love the way you make Oli and Matt and what not talk. Because that's actually how they talk and I find myself talking out loud while reading their dialogue, is that weird? Lol but I really like this story. I just started it today but I already read the whole thing! You're a really good writer and I can't wait for the next update! :)

Thank you for the update, I can't wait for the next chapters to come out too. Haha, sorry, I don't know what else to say, I just really like this story :P

updattttte

IM IN LOVE WITH THIS OHMYGOOOD

This is so fucking good. I love Eloise's character, along with the way Oli is portrayed.

This story is really good, it's well written and the characters are amazing. Keep it up!

this is one of the best most realistic oli stories i've ever read...I love it! Please update soon

THIS IS SO GOOD!! My favorite Oli story ever. :)

Ohmygod this is amazing! Update soon please. :)

Can't wait for the next update!

Ugh perfecttt can't wait till the next chapter!!

ahhh i love this story so much, i hope you continue it!

this was a good first chapter!