Yeah! She did it! She said that he was hurting her when he pushed her away. (I start to really like Em and how she evolves) Maybe it was the "click" Oli needs. And maybe in a next chapter........ Idk. Tom is a great character, and I'm happy that he's so present in the story. He's like the big brother after all :) Can't wait the next update. I'll be there! See you :)
Okay, this chapter did something to me. All the feelings and thoughts of wanting to hit someone with a chair got bigger and kind of smaller. (hard yo explain xD) If Oliver Sykes would actually be like this Oli, i would hunt him down, give him the biggest lecture i could aannddd hit him with something, not chair because well, he had to go through my rage lecture xD I really like Tom in this, his actually doing so much for Oli and Em. (after hitting Oli i would probably hug Tom.) I love how hardly determined Em is, Oli kind of deserves her, in every possible way, even if his hurting her with all this 'we can't be together' shit. But god I think I'm too much into this story, I'm acting like I would be watching some reality tv. The bitchtits still gets me annoyed. Heather is trying luckily, but fuck I want to hit her with baseball bat that has nails in the end of it. I think I have somekind of anger issue but fuck it. I love the story even more than I did week ago, you're doing absolutely mint job, love and can't wait for the next chapter, which is better be here much sooner than the last one.
Love, the biggest twat in the universe, TravelerSoul.
Ps. I don't know why I end my comments like letters, but anygays.
I can't even at how lovestruck Oli is <3 but he needs to suck it up and ask Emerson out already! I can't wait to read some more. This story is one of my favs :)
OH NO YOU DIDN'T. I mean the chapter started so well and then you decided to make Oliver even more stubborn than he already is. god i wish i could just smack him with a chair and make him realize that he can try be with Emerson and if it wont work out, they could just go back to being just really, really close friends. It's funny how Oliver is so stubborn twat that he can't see that Emerson would probably be much happier and shit if Oliver would just ask her to be his. OH AND WHAT EVER YOU DO, DON'T MAKE EM FALL IN LOVE WITH ANYONE ELSE OR EVEN DATE ANYONE ELSE. it would be a bullet into the heart if you did so.
I loved the part where oliver was so vulnerable with all that lovey dovey thing. I could kill for a guy like that, who promises his heart for me and shit.
Another well written chapter love. Good job, like always. <3