February 27th, 2013 at 02:38am
Hmm this is interesting. I like how it's in present tense. The ending was good, I loved it. It wasn't predictable and fit very well.
I like how you described it, and who the monsters were. Unique. Very good job with this. Very much love it.
Thank you! I kind of just made it up as I went. I wasn't really sure how it was going to turn out.