A Family Tradition - Comments

thx i will try to work harder on my next one!

I know you're young and this is your first story but have a look at other people's stories to see about grammar and the way paragraphs are set out. TARDISblue is a great example, she has amazing description and is one of my favorite authors on Mibba. Take a look at her work :)

thx could you check my other story?

-molly

Okay so I liked it very much :3 BUT, you need to remember capital letters and your grammar, just practice around and you will get better

- Hannah