A Story More Perfect - Comments

  • treat02

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    @ writingismypassion23
    If I ever start something, I finish it. Sometimes when I'm on my Ipad I only write short little things. :) But I still read.
    August 13th, 2013 at 03:25pm
  • Writer in the Rye

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    @ treat02
    ahhhh omg omg omg your comments are like making me cry hahaha :) I don't know why you're obsessed either, it absolutely makes my world but they're not that good XD I've never had a reader as involved and kind as you, usually they read one chapter and are like "yah.. good job... bye..." and they don't read the rest of my work. Thank you so so so so so so so much, it truly means the world to me!!
    August 13th, 2013 at 02:39pm
  • treat02

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    This is great! I don't know why I'm so obsessed. tehe
    I love the detail, and it makes it easier to draw it out into my head. It's very well written, not to mention entertaining.
    August 13th, 2013 at 01:30pm
  • heart of storm

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    OH LOOK HER NAME IS SONNET
    March 20th, 2013 at 02:05am
  • Thingtastic

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    This is wonderful! Beautifully written and so realistic! Not many people can get the family feel into their stories. along with the main characters emotions! Wonderful job! :D
    March 6th, 2013 at 10:05pm
  • TheShiningSoul

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    Wow this is really good! You have a real talent! You've put loads of detail in this and it's amazing.x x
    February 14th, 2013 at 06:32pm
  • Lunar.Moon

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    You should really make this longer, I am very interested in it=D
    February 12th, 2013 at 03:33am