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  • BeautifullyInsane

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    It's fairly good. I'm interested to see how things will work out with her alcoholic brother and how her parents died exactly. The first chapter had some repititive words in it, especially in the beginning. You seem to be quite good with dailogue. But then again, you're a teen, you should know how they speak =P.
    Good effort. Would love to see more!
    April 28th, 2008 at 01:30am
  • i.dont.love.you

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    yay!
    very nice story!!
    a tad more detailll!
    other than that, GREAT!
    all my love
    lace
    April 25th, 2008 at 03:24am
  • x-eyeXsing-x

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    hey I really really like this! It's a good story and I can't wait to read what's going to happen next! update soon :) ?
    April 25th, 2008 at 03:13am
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