Girl!!!! Shit woman! The last two chapters are amazing, but nothing like Commit to Memory. I love them together and yet I understand where the concern will come in when Oliver has to return to the UK for recording and life in general. I'm super excited though because these two have progressed quite beautifully and I'm so anxious to see the rest. (Sorry about the delayed comment too. I haven't had time to get online in a long while.) Noticed a few spelling and grammar errors in the last two chapters, but it didn't necessarily take away from the overall content. Love it and look forward to the next one =D
Well thank you ma'am for the honorable mention at the end of Semi-Naked ='D It's a first and a great one at that. Also, I love how you handled the situation with Jona. That may be exactly what happened and it makes it plausible for those left in the dark by BMTH...due to legal reasons of course, but all the same xD I like this and I'm kind of excited to see the whole thing with Jordan =D
@ Sydney4Vicious omg i never even considered writing a jordan story, but now you've planted that idea in my head and im already trying to think of something ahaha
I don't know how to feel about Mr. Fish xD I am actually a Jona lover myself, but I think you could incorporate it into the story just like it basically happened in real life. It could actually be amiable unlike the cryptic reasons the fans had I think. It's up to you ultimately. I think it would be interesting to see Jordan get honorable mentions though =] It helps if you wanted to make a story about him in the future ;D
@ Sydney4Vicious thanks so much for your comment seriously they're great. And ive seen them i think three times now and they get better every time, im thinking about adding Jordan Fish into the story and kicking Jona out cause im a little in love with Jordan, thoughts?
You awesome and lucky woman! =D I've seen them once, but they really do know how to make a show memorable. All the same, keep going with your updates. I love that Oli is completely cool with Indie's daughter and I just want to see if they finally come to a conclusion about being together. Love the new gif too! =D There's never enough Oliver in the world ^.^
And so the tale twists further xD Wonder why Chanti is being the way she is. Matt is quite the catch ;) Oli's protectiveness is admirable without being overbearing, but I also enjoy that Indie is happy for what happened in her lfie despite the circumstances behind it. Ava is a great add in as always and it's cute that she talks non-stop about Oli =D Can't wait for more!
So very cute =D I love that Indie kissed him, but that it wasn't forced and it was just spur of the moment in gratitude. Can't wait for the next one now xD