The Loneliest of Stars - Comments

@ EmileXJon
Thank you ouo

It was so cute. ^w^ <3

@ arizonia1
Shanks ^.^ i dont pay much attention to background stuff, usually just the gameplay they do.

A few things, mostly constructive.

One, a great story and it flowed really well for this kind of story.

Two, if you make Emile twenty-one Jon would be twenty-six, he's five years older, and Tim is thirty-six, ten years older than Jon.

Three, Emiles name is Emiliano

Four, he is not autistic, he has a hyperactivity disorder, but is still smart. Tim is mildly autistic

Those above things are mostly for future reference. The story was still a good read.