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  • sonnybunny124

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    @ EmileXJon
    Thank you ouo
    June 21st, 2013 at 02:51am
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    It was so cute. ^w^ <3
    June 21st, 2013 at 12:42am
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    @ arizonia1
    Shanks ^.^ i dont pay much attention to background stuff, usually just the gameplay they do.
    May 6th, 2013 at 10:49pm
  • makiki1

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    A few things, mostly constructive.

    One, a great story and it flowed really well for this kind of story.

    Two, if you make Emile twenty-one Jon would be twenty-six, he's five years older, and Tim is thirty-six, ten years older than Jon.

    Three, Emiles name is Emiliano

    Four, he is not autistic, he has a hyperactivity disorder, but is still smart. Tim is mildly autistic

    Those above things are mostly for future reference. The story was still a good read. Mr. Green
    May 6th, 2013 at 06:20pm
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