Twin Turbo - Comments

@ NegativeA - don't even worry about it! It's just something I believe in; people getting credit when they should (:

@ WatchingGravity.
Thanks much! :)

I really like this! Normally, I'm not a fan of short stories, because I'm always afraid of missing information and feeling unsatisfied, but this - it's good. You hit all the major points, and I didn't have to read between the lines for the match between beginning and end. (: Your character and voice is really strong in this, good job.