Taken Love - Comments

I need some ideas on what I should write about next and I've been so busy that I havent had much time to really look at this, but some ideas would be great:)

thank you guys, it makes me really happy that you have enjoyed it so far.
--Marin

Please update , I really love this story

I hope you update soon!

I like this story! Hope you update soon :)

@ XTeamSammiX
Thank you for the comment and I was thinking I probably had some errrors

This story is very interesting. You have a great plot line so far. You do have some errors through out the story though. I don't want to sound mean, because I can edit mine five times and still have a few, but those errors are what can take away from the story. It might help to go back and read over it a few time, maybe even out loud. Or you could always find someone to edit it for you.

Interesting story. Good job

Very Vivid