Taken Love - Comments

Minka_grey (100)

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I need some ideas on what I should write about next and I've been so busy that I havent had much time to really look at this, but some ideas would be great:)

thank you guys, it makes me really happy that you have enjoyed it so far.
--Marin

February 17th, 2016 at 05:38am

CyannaMichele (100)

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Please update , I really love this story

November 1st, 2015 at 07:32pm

Linzee_Gee (100)

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I hope you update soon!

October 1st, 2013 at 11:18pm

LOVE1516 (100)

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I like this story! Hope you update soon :)

July 6th, 2013 at 10:03pm

Minka_grey (100)

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@ XTeamSammiX
Thank you for the comment and I was thinking I probably had some errrors

February 11th, 2013 at 02:59am

XTeamSammiX (100)

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This story is very interesting. You have a great plot line so far. You do have some errors through out the story though. I don't want to sound mean, because I can edit mine five times and still have a few, but those errors are what can take away from the story. It might help to go back and read over it a few time, maybe even out loud. Or you could always find someone to edit it for you.

February 9th, 2013 at 04:07pm

Johnny Ringo (100)

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Interesting story. Good job

February 9th, 2013 at 03:37pm

rideoakley (100)

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Very Vivid

February 7th, 2013 at 07:06pm