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  • i-pi3rc3d-th3-k3llic

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    “Sorry, m-my legs are gross I guess… I just… uh…” he cut himself off, shaking his head, but Vic held up a finger to his lips. ... “I still think you’re beautiful,” he whispered, his breath tickling Kellin’s skin. .. wow i just, i cried okay ..
    July 15th, 2013 at 08:14pm
  • i-pi3rc3d-th3-k3llic

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    “Sorry, m-my legs are gross I guess… I just… uh…” he cut himself off, shaking his head, but Vic held up a finger to his lips. ... “I still think you’re beautiful,” he whispered, his breath tickling Kellin’s skin. .. wow i just, i cried okay ..
    July 15th, 2013 at 08:14pm
  • Bloody Bandit

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    OMFG
    NO ONE DOES IT BETTER
    ARE YOU KIDDING ME
    THAT WAS FUCKING *add gay guy voice for effect* A-MA-ZINGGGG
    JUST
    AJXJDJDVJDJEJWHWGWGVSDIDJDVDGCUWNZOALNXDL
    MY FUCKING FEELSSSSSS
    STOP
    NOWWWWWWWWW
    UGH
    MY HEART
    I CANT TAKE ALL THIS HAPPINESSSSSSSS
    *fucking dies*
    *cold breeze fills the room*
    *house shakes*
    *ugly ghost shows up*
    *sarcastic ghost voice* I hope you're happy -_-
    May 21st, 2013 at 12:15am
  • YumCats

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    OH MY GOD IT UPDATED ***cries**
    May 20th, 2013 at 12:04am
  • Broken_Capulet

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    I'm sobbing oh my God that was so sweet and this is one of my favorite songs by YMAS and when they said
    '“You saved me,” said Kellin in between kisses.
    “You saved me, too,” Vic responded' I was just like IF I JUST SAAAAVEEEEE YOUUUU, YOU COULD SAAAVE ME TOOOOOO and when Kellin said '"No one can ever compare to you, Vic. No on loves like you do, or smiles or laughs like you do… No one does it better.”' I LITERALLY SCREAMED I LOVE THIS STORY SFM I'M SAD IT'S OVER IT WAS SO PERFECT AND NOW I'M EMOTIONAL BYE
    May 18th, 2013 at 09:58pm
  • YumCats

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    UPDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTTEEEEEEEEEEE
    May 11th, 2013 at 09:37am
  • Bloody Bandit

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    Pleeeeeaaaaaasssssssse update
    May 8th, 2013 at 04:37am
  • YumCats

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    alright you HAVE to update this because this is literally my relationship drugs and all so yeah.
    May 4th, 2013 at 09:50am
  • Bloody Bandit

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    Please update wait
    April 28th, 2013 at 05:15pm
  • Bloody Bandit

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    ASDFGHJKL UPDATE
    April 25th, 2013 at 10:00pm
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    ASDFGHJKL UPDATE
    April 25th, 2013 at 10:00pm
  • Bloody Bandit

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    OMFG UPDATE PLEASSSSSSSSSSSE
    April 25th, 2013 at 01:36am
  • under-this-exterior

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    You're amazing oh my god. You wrote the sex scene with it all about their love for each other, instead of simply lust like a lot of kellic stories I've read. I love how you took the time to develop their relationship instead of them saying I love you after the first chapter like I've seen so many times. This is just incredible, kudos Smile
    March 30th, 2013 at 03:28pm
  • Dani-kupo

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    This is absolute perfection. Seriously, one of the best Kellic stories I've read to date. You are an amazing writer and I really cannot wait to read more from you. Your Kellin is flawless. You made me fall in love with him by the end of chapter two, I swear. How you portrayed a detoxing Kellin was so wonderfully profound; his mood swings and exclamations and adorable paranoia, all of it. You make it all so incredibly real, it makes me shudder with delight. I feel as if this story is nearing its end, and even thou I know you'll end it exquisitely, I can't help but feel a bit sad that this story that I literally had to tear away from at 4 am to go to sleep (before immediately jumping back in the next morning before school) will be over. I applaud you and this wonderful story. Totally made my day, love.
    March 29th, 2013 at 05:07pm
  • Broken_Capulet

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    sobbing omfg this was so sweet
    March 29th, 2013 at 06:04am
  • bmth

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    i just read this whole chapter out to my friend. HOLY SHIT. <3
    March 29th, 2013 at 05:13am
  • Broken_Capulet

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    Holy crap this story is perfection. I've been crying over this for hours, your writing is phenomenal.
    March 26th, 2013 at 04:46am
  • teethsoup

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    wait, no i want smut!!!
    March 23rd, 2013 at 05:06am
  • teethsoup

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    Oh lord, YOU CAN'T LEAVE IT LIKE THIS.
    March 12th, 2013 at 07:21am
  • iridescenteyes

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    I love this so much! c:
    March 7th, 2013 at 11:34pm