Oh that was super cute. I like the everyday interactions mixed in with the sexy bits. And the bit about Brian calling everyone by their first name made me laugh so hard. Also the spank like a naughty child bit could totally be an unknown kink of Zee's.
Fifty Shades is a good book, Synacky is sexy, this shit is seriously my kink... and what you just wrote had me fanning myself. Haha. That was amazing! Keep it up & I'm def sharing it with a few other fanfic lovers! :-)
Hot damn it. That was smoking. I loved it. God I cannot wait for more from this. If the Fifty shades books were more like this I wouldn't have stopped halfway through the first one.
Ohhh I can't wait to see Zack's reaction to the play room. I have a little thing that kinda bothers me, the way you write the conversations is confusing because they are all mushed together so maybe if you write the conversation like "Would you like some?" Suzy asked "I would love some."