I love the tone of this. I love the way this story just flows really well and how it's so relatable to many situations and not just of the revival of FOB. It's a simple and easy read and gives inspiration, how the comeback of something can give you new hopes and desires. The connection to the picture was well done. The only criticism I have for this is that you swapped tenses from first to third but regardless, I really liked the piece. Thanks for entering!
February 17th, 2013 at 10:45am
