Strength of the World - Comments

Gnah!!
She needs to tell Matt!
And Matt and Jimmy :O! But Jimmy knows!!!
x

oooooooooo!
He kissed her!
I so knew he wanted her.
But does she want him?!

okay...now you get my first review...I know it's bad...cause you provided us already with 60 *gasp* chapters compared to my first review...but I warn you it's gonna be a little longer, since I like to comment on a few things ;) :P :)

First...they meet in a public restroom??? how romantic is that??? lol I found it quite amusing how Bekah was struggling to get her ring...

I love it how you still describe the emotional situation that Val is going through...not just make her a "stuck up bitch" I really do have sympathy for her...she's having a battle she cannot win and she's desperate...I like that you still take time to show her situation. And even if this is "fiction", this is like a real life situation...not everything is perfect!

Bekah is a contradictory character for me. First she acts all strong and though, but then she starts to argue about irrelevant stuff and is totally stuck up...I mean, come on her best friend gets married and SHE IS mad??? Why? Because Olivia didn't tell her? Maybe Olivia wanted to tell her in person? Shouldn't the best friend be supportive??? *shakes head*
When on the other hand Oliva was totally happy when she saw the engagement ring on Bekah's finger...

And I'm asking myself why does Matt want to marry her??? I mean, seriously, since they arrived in Cali she hasn't done anything but bitching...is she pregnant with all those emotion changes???

And who is she to tell Syn to stop using??? It's not very sensitive to tell him to stop at the airport and on the other hand she doesn't know him very well...she doesn't know the reson why he started...her help is without effect. You can't just tell some drug addict to stop using and expect him to do so, that's so naive...

Actually she just made it worse...Syn is now mad at his friends for not caring, what is wrong because they obviously talked about him but didn't know how to approach him...and now he even overdosed...*sigh*

But if Syn really has feelings for Bekah (and I seriously thought he liked Olivia ;) ), we'll see...

I totally dig Olivia and Johnny...they're the perfect fit...I love their little arguments over nothing ;) :P And Olivia is very brave to marry in Las Vegas...just him and her, who else do you need. Okay the killing part was not that nice...but I'm wondering how that will turn out. I mean if the cops aren't that dump they'll find the connection between Johnny and the man because of Larry and the accident...but we'll see if there's evidence to a murder :shock:

I found it quite amusing how you just dropped a little bomb in one of the last chapters...Bekah's still married??? Totally unexpectant...!

Oh, and I loved the scene with Jimmy and the ultrasound picture of his kid...sorry, kids...and the woman who finally enlightened him...lol

And poor Val...she's really bad at the relationship thing...didn't see that she hadn't had a chance with Matt....and now is telling that Syn is in love with Michelle when it's obvious he's head over heels for Bekah...oi...somehow I think Bekah is ruining the Dibendetto's relationships :shock: :shock: :shock:

Can't wait what up and downs you still have for us!

Hope to read more of the story, soon!

OMG!
Talk about changes!
Jimmy with the receptionist...yet another spat out tea moment!

So let me get this straight,
Brian likes Bekah?

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay....more updates :D
you're spoiling us woman...you really are :D
i just love it...but if you can...add in some random comedy moments...that would just make it HUGELY awesome (not that its not already...just a thought)
xx

eek!!
love it!!!
wow, olivia's family is weird!

awww poor Johnny!!
more soon?

Your massive updates just give us excellent reading material, dork - they are not "overwhelming"

I'm sure your readers here would love to get completely caught up with this series.

Unlucky Johnny!
=[

You go Beckah!
I like her again now......
=]

so now Olivia is annoying me...
gah!!

Jimmy the druggie......
even more crazy than usual.
And go Leana! You tell her girl!!
Woot woot!!

wow...massive updateage!!
more soon??

Oooh yayness!
only 30 more chapters! hahaha
Sucking donkey dicks...love that saying so much!! XD

Gotta have more when you have time, please ;)

Engagementness!
And twinness!
Woot!""

*barfs into bucket*
How mushy!! XD

love it

Jimmy sized chapters eh?
*wiggles eyebrows*
Ignore the hormonal, filthy thinking teen......