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  • kimistry

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    Oh gosh! What will happen next?! D8
    February 11th, 2009 at 05:21am
  • shuffling-scene

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    dude F N PIMP YO! fer sure!!!
    love it!
    can't wait till the next update!
    December 23rd, 2008 at 11:01am
  • D. Dixon

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    dude, it's not shitty!
    dude, i love it!
    dude, update soon!
    ;]
    hahaha, yeah i still gotta do it.
    December 23rd, 2008 at 04:09am
  • ForeverPlagued

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    uh oh! i hope it's not matt and if it is, i hope he doesn't hurt her!
    December 23rd, 2008 at 02:33am
  • Psycho Lunatic

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    Awesome update, I loved it, what is he gonna do though.
    December 22nd, 2008 at 07:01pm
  • finallymoving.

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    really like this =]
    December 22nd, 2008 at 05:44pm
  • so far away

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    I love it.
    It's so you with the whole Hubba hubba thing
    December 22nd, 2008 at 08:23am
  • Psycho Lunatic

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    Kool story, I like it.
    December 14th, 2008 at 01:21pm
  • Kasey J Vengeance.

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    I just started reading this story and it's so sad and fucked up, but I like it. I hope you update it soon
    November 17th, 2008 at 05:38pm
  • D. Dixon

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    "Go get in the fucking car," Matt said. He pointed behind towards his white truck. Zacky backed up, like he was trying to hide me from Matt. "Dude, I'll seriously kick your ass."

    "Dude, just leave her alone. Seriously," Zacky said, backing us up.

    "Whatever, dude. Don't worry. I'll be back later," he said, stomping off.

    ah hahaha!
    dude, that's still funny!
    dude, you've gotta write more soon!
    love ya dude!
    :tehe: Ha Ha
    October 27th, 2008 at 06:33pm
  • xXvengeance.loveXx

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    why is matt such a dickhead father?
    i love zacky, he finally used his alcoholic brainand figured it out, i think.
    can't wait for more!
    October 5th, 2008 at 04:58pm
  • ForeverPlagued

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    *gasp* ohhhh matt is such an ass! and i guess zacky finally figured it out, yeah? can't wait for more!
    October 5th, 2008 at 02:39pm
  • shuffling-scene

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    oh my god love it alot
    great plot and everything
    but yea awesome
    can't wait for more
    *subscribes*
    October 5th, 2008 at 05:53am
  • D. Dixon

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    dude, seriously, i love this story.
    dude, you've gotta update soon!
    dude, rock on!
    ^_^...dude!
    October 5th, 2008 at 05:51am
  • FamousLastWords.

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    this story is great so far! update soon! =]
    October 5th, 2008 at 05:33am
  • alyv08

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    love it :]
    shes not gonna go back to Matt's house...is she?
    October 5th, 2008 at 05:16am
  • ForeverPlagued

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    ohh me likey this story so far! please update soon!
    July 9th, 2008 at 12:26pm
  • ProverbofHell

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    Quote
    “You know what I always wanted to do?”

    “What’s that?” I asked. He looked at me smiled and then he kissed me.
    Tstststs....Zacky Zacky Zacky...kissing a teenager! He must be...how old by now?
    I can imagine Sanders angry, but just cannot manage to picture him beating a girl, on top of that his own daughter.
    And now, she runs off to Zacky? Hum...things are gonna get complicated, coz we both know they'l sooo end up in the same bed, lol!
    *subscribes*
    June 29th, 2008 at 09:03am
  • alyv08

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    great story. i love it. can't wait for the nxt chapter(s)
    June 23rd, 2008 at 05:22am
  • tiffanydarlingxo

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    Love it :]
    June 22nd, 2008 at 09:45pm
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