Touchdown - Comments

Pretty sure this is the longest smutty oneshot I read that wasn't entirely sex. I love the lead up! I love getting to know them, how they interact with each other, and how they feel about each other. It was really cute. I loved her "TOUCHDOWN" undies and Logan's barbecue breath! You know, I've actually never heard of proposing this way... At games, sure. But watching one? And sticking the box in your crotch? That's really unique. You did an awesome job, darling!

@ BTRLover1221

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This is probably one of my favorite Logan one shots you've written. I love Logan and Kandi's relatioship so much it's not even funny. They both bring out these cute, silly sides of each other and I think it's the cutest thing ever. You're also an extremely detailed writer, and it's seriously a breath of fresh air to see so much detail in a story, seeing as though I and a lot of other people usually stick to more dialogue. Long story short, I'm a huge fan of your writing, and this one shot was yet another amazing one. :)