All The Pretty Girls - Comments

Holly's such an annoying slut can she just go

UPDATE SOON PLS <3 AWESOMESAUCE!! :)

pretty please update soon :) <3

SERIOUSLY IT'S OBVI NOT JACK BC IF IT WAS I WOULD KICK HIM IN THE BALLS.
STOP BEING A LITTLE BITCH ALEX AND TALK TO HIM ABOUT IT UGH.
UPDATE SOON YAY

you couldn't just write two more lines and fix this, could you? :(

omg love this

ALEX YOU NEED TO TALK IT OUT WITH JACK YOU KNOW JACK DIDN'T TEXT YOU THAT
IT WAS HOLLY THAT AWFUL BITCH

DAMN ALEX. I LIKES THAT LIL SLY DIG AT THE END YO ;) PRETTY SMART CHILD. Anywhores, they should really really talk about it and hiufhedusfuds I'm really really excited for your next update :)

Damn you Holly texting lies to Alex like that

holly probably wrote it or she blackmailed jack into writing it wtf im pissed at her

...........................Please update. Just please update.
<333 LOVES.

oh hell no
nope no.
That's holly's bitch ass and i know it.
Mmmnmmm no.
(eheheheheh puns)

that was obviously holly texting that from jacks phone can someone just shot her or something pls. btw love this

ohmygod this is perfection. i cant want for the next chapter eeeee ^^

@ notabletoconnect
I know right. Kinda hurt deep in the gut
>.<

oh come on the text was so unnecessary, stop hurting Alex

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YOU DIDN'T. PLEASE!!! NO!!!! FUCKING HOLLY!!!??? WAS IT HER?!?!? JACK WOULDN'T SAY THAT!!! JACK COULDN'T SAY THAT?!?!?! DON'T MAKE ME CRYYYYYYYY!! HOLLY IS BEING SUCH A WHORE!! NONONONONONONONONONONONO ALEX SHOULD BE LOVED AND CHERISHED THAT POOR BABY!!! Tay and Wendy should just be like shoulders to cry on, and like as much as I hate him sleeping with anyone but Jack... Alex should get laid for just receiving that message. 3SOME

OMG I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU AND BY YOU I MEAN HOLLY AND JACK AND FUSDHJDVBD AS DFUCK FUCK FUCK. HOLLY IS A WHORE AND SHE'S PROBABLY BEHIND THAT DAMN TEXT MESSAGE. OH MY FUCKING CHILD.

Eww the end of this chapter. I love the fact that you apologized at the end haha. And I love the end of the last chapter too. Sorry I didn't get to comment on the last one. I read them both now 'cause I've been mega busy. Also, you write the gay porn really well haha

jack stap ;-;