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I knew going to the last page of the short stories would pay off and it did! I really loved this, and i'm probably going to read it again. xD Great job. :)

I honestly can't get enough of this story. It always just gets me!

This is beautifully written

I love, love, love this piece. The descriptions and comparisons used within the writing are just breathtaking and original. They aren't strange comparisons either, and they really give the reader a sort of sense of longing and soft desperation. I think many people can relate to that sort of feeling.

Simply gorgeous work.

Gorgeous

holy lsdfnglakndglknret this is perfect. You use words so beautifully and masterfully and everything seems to just flow so well. The problem I have with most stories is that I tend to skip sections - but this, I didn't skip at all. I read every phrase and word! It's really beautiful, thank you for sharing! (':

Oh my God! This was so beautiful! I love the words, the imagery, and for the love of air! Simply beautiful!

I just love this. It's beautiful. <3

This was beautiful, I read this story when I woke up yesterday morning and it was a lovely start to my day. You have a soft way with words and for you to produce something like this from being absent with your writing is impressive, I guess you really never forget when you have it, and you have it! Your flow was wonderful and I love written pieces like this, the gift of straight storytelling, awesome narrative stories are my favorite and I adored this. I truly did.

YOU KNOW WHAT THIS REMINDS ME OF?
SHANIA TWAIN'S SONG. I forget what it's called but it goes "OOOOH I'm jealous of the suuuun, I'm jealous of the moooon"

Oh. It's called "I'm Jealous." I just googled it~

Lovely!

Lovely!