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  • bxgurl95

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    :( where'd this story go again?
    March 5th, 2014 at 08:37pm
  • bxgurl95

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    where did the chapters go?
    November 5th, 2013 at 05:17am
  • lovelyacoustic

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    dude, i wanna read your niall book! haha!!

    i thoroughly cannot WAIT for the awkwardness that will ensue with this story!!!!! i'm like, dying of anticipation!! awkward scenarios are the freaking BEST!!!
    March 19th, 2013 at 05:10pm
  • heretic.

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    I'm not a one direction fan but I really like this!! :D Are you really going to make me wait a week?.. haha
    March 19th, 2013 at 03:10pm
  • bxgurl95

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    Wow it really makes me wonder what book you were reading.
    March 19th, 2013 at 05:19am
  • onlythegooddieyoung

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    "My lawyer for the day." I don't know why, but that made me giggle. Hahaha.

    Oh my Godddd. This totally sounds like what he'd have to deal with, though. Detrimental to their popularity. -_- Hahahaa. That's just sad.

    I love how, like...uptight the whole thing was. Hahaha. It was like, so incredibly business-like. I think I would have burst out laughing in the middle from discomfort. Hahaha.

    The only reason I like Mondays: This story. Hahahah.
    March 12th, 2013 at 02:53am
  • lovelyacoustic

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    i wish that harry didn't have to put up with all of this pr bullcrap! the sweet, poor boy. :( <x3 if i were a man, i'd date him!! if he were into women, i'd date him!!!! <3 <3

    i love how professional and cold the entire exchange was. it was mature and very well done. i also liked how young tess still is what with how you phrased her not caring about the lawyers names nor faces. it was perfect! i don't want to have to wait an entire week for the next addition, but i understand the need to have time to make it perfect! Mr. Green love this!!!
    March 11th, 2013 at 07:27pm
  • onlythegooddieyoung

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    :o Obviously, I already knew what was going to happen, but it was just done so perfectly that I was still like, "Oh, God, what's going to happen?" I'm so excited to see how the meeting goes and what complications will come from the whole facade.

    This story is the bomb. Goodbye. ^_^
    March 8th, 2013 at 05:32pm
  • bxgurl95

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    This is a nice thing to look forwrd to on Mondays :)
    I don't think this is cliché I have no idea where this is going to lead and I'm excited to find out. He's desperate but their friendship obviously means something to him since he trusts her so deeply. And she's alsotrusting him.
    March 5th, 2013 at 02:19pm
  • lovelyacoustic

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    but what if the pretense is that all of the boys know that harry's secretly in love with tess and louis's agreed to let harry say he's in love with him so that he could go through this entirely strange mind eff to get her to fall in love with him! hahaha!!! it's like inception in fanfic form! hahaha!!! Mr. Green

    i love this idea though, it's so great!! :) i can't wait to see the awkward situations that'll arise from it!!!!!
    March 4th, 2013 at 11:59pm
  • iWearConverse

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    Your writing is beautiful lol I love this story
    March 4th, 2013 at 07:25am
  • ButterGirl96

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    Amazing. I love this story so much.
    Can't wait until the next update!
    March 4th, 2013 at 04:50am
  • ButterGirl96

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    I was definately not expecting that.
    Can't wait til the next update.
    February 27th, 2013 at 11:50pm
  • imacrimiminal

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    is this gonna be a larry fan fic? :o
    February 27th, 2013 at 01:10pm
  • lovelyacoustic

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    duuuuuuuuuuuude!!!!! i was NOT expecting that!!! apparently she wasn't either hahah!! Mr. Green i wanna know what the plot of the story is rwaaaah! is it harry falling for the girl or just coping with what he's just revealed to us all?! EEEEEP!! i need more! xD
    February 27th, 2013 at 02:59am
  • bxgurl95

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    Well to say that that. Was unexpected would be an understatement. It made me even more intrigued and excited to read! :)
    February 27th, 2013 at 02:58am
  • the_space_between

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    YYEEEES!! This revelation made me love this story so much more. It's such a unique, interesting, and realistic approach to larry. i love love love. cant wait for more. did i mention i love this?
    February 27th, 2013 at 02:55am
  • reader_666

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    Ok...so I like this a lot :)
    February 22nd, 2013 at 09:34am
  • cbjfan40

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    This looks like its going to be a great story!!! I can't wait to read more. :)
    February 19th, 2013 at 03:40am
  • lovelyacoustic

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    This is great!!!! I can't wait to see why Harry is bugging out!!! :D I can't wait for the next chapter! Mr. Green
    February 18th, 2013 at 12:41pm
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