Predator - Comments

laceyvengeance (100)

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I love it!
Please write another chapter with Syn in it..she deserves to have a "happy ending" also.. :3

March 4th, 2013 at 06:03am

BeenDownThatRoad (100)

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Damn IPhone keypad! Sorry for the errors in my comment, but hopefully you got the gist of it:)

March 3rd, 2013 at 06:46pm

BeenDownThatRoad (100)

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Yes yes, the man with the chocolate wyes and high cheekbones indeed!!! Lol. I really liked this, I totally think you should expand it so age runs of to Syn. That would be so hot. Selfish Matt, tsk tsk.

March 3rd, 2013 at 06:44pm

purple89 (100)

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This was sooo great!!! i loved that it was second person....it made that yummy visual so much better.....great job and good luck in the contest!!

February 26th, 2013 at 12:27am

Moriarty; (250)

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Wow...this was amazing! Extremely creative choosing to write from a second person perspective, it is hard and you did a really good job with it! Dom Matt has always been my favourtist out of all of them, and you did such a good job at writing him. What a douche to leave her hanging on, silly man. But now I'm getting off subject...I really loved this one-shot and you did a great job! Thank you so much for entering :)

February 20th, 2013 at 07:16pm

colddarkheart (100)

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OKay you have me hooked already, great job. I love it

February 20th, 2013 at 09:11am