The Only Exception - Comments

These chapters are GRAND!!! The intense feelings and harsh situations are great. Keep it up and post soon. :)

In Chapter One you spelt 'toilet' wrong a couple of times in the second paragraph, 'thirteen' is misspelled in the third para and 'because' is misspelled in para ten, please don't hate me :s

Otherwise I really love the first chapter, it had raw emotion and I was tearing up and also yelling at Callisto.

I found some more really minor things in the following chapters, would you mind if we PM'd each other and I helped you out that way? You don't have to if you don't want!

Sorry it took me so long to get to you, work keeps me pretty busy. I didn't lie though, here is your free comment!

I feel like these characters are really exaggerated. I understand depression, and aggression pretty well and even though every case is different, I don't feel like these characters are very realistic. I also really want to stress the importance of proofreading. There are many spelling and grammar errors in this. Sometimes I even find it hard to follow.

That being said, I think this story has a lot of potential. The emotional things the two characters are going through are very real. It really breaks my heart that things like this really happen to people every single day. I really commend you on being able to write about real life problems. It takes a lot of guts to be able to write about something you know other people go through, or maybe something you go through as well.

Again Callistro is a bitch, fuck her I almost completely done with her. Kellin NO! DONT! YOU HAVE SO MUCH TO LIVE FOR! And the update was amazing :D:D cant wait for more :)

OMFG!!! Callisto is such a bitch but her character is really realistic so I like her. Sometimes she goes over the top but its true, plus it has happened to a dear friend of mine. I hope Kellin can man up a little as the story goes. Loved the updates, post more soon. :) I'm addicted here. <3333

Callisto please do me a favor and drown in the shower. Please and thank you, just because you suffer doesn't mean he has too you selfish stupid bitch. Well can't wait for more and thanks for updating :D:D

Can Callisto die in a fire? Like I don't care what happened to her at all when you push someone who has no idea into attempting suicide several times especially your own brother you become disgusting trash.

I need more his story is great. ^.^

Can't wait for more and Callisto is a bitch, keeping shit a secret no matter how bad it is won't help at all. And blaming it on her brother won't make it better, please let jesus do us a favor and have her smacked the fuck up. But I love it can't wait for more :)

Loved the updates. XD

i like the characters, really realistic which always is nice to see! i like it so far! the plot is really intense, which makes it really interesting! you handled a lot of the situations really nicely, so all of the events tie into each other and make it keep from getting boring! this is definitely something i'll sub to!

I've read the first few chapters,

Here are my thoughts:
Your characters are very realistic, which really helps visualize the story. But I agree with what everybody dies; put, Callisto can be too harsh at points.
I've read a few stories with similar storylines, nothing really similar but there's a definite resemblance, and the stories always seemed really cliche and boring but you managed to avoid that. Which was a definite bonus because as awesome as certain cliches are most are just plain annoying. You have a very good standard of writing, with decent vocabulary but like always nothing is perfect and I did pick up on a few errors.

I really want to read the rest of this and I definitely will when I have time

Courtney :)

You have an interesting start here. The summary does seem slightly cliché in places, but as I read it became evident that you've handled the parts that could be cliché very delicately and have done a really good job of making it your own. Your characters are well-rounded and speak their mind, which I like (although Callisto can be mean to the point of disbelief at points so I'd watch that).

The description is also good, and you use a decent amount of imagery which allows the reader to paint a clear picture in my head. I would suggest double-checking your chapters as I did notice a few typos when I was reading, but they were nothing serious.

All in all, a good read. Not something that I would read myself, but interesting all the same. Good work!

omg his sister seems a bit harsh, although i think i can guess what happened to her and kind of understand, they're bith so messed up omg i cant wait to see where you take this story!

That's a nice start you have here guys. I liked the simple summary as well as the first two chapters. The first chapter made me wonder what else you'll make poor Kellin go through and the second one made me wanna know what happened to Callisto that made her hate her cute brother as well as the mystery going on with Callisto's past. Did I mention I love the layout and the banner which looks like a book's cover? The people of the photograph I guess are the twins. You seriously have to keep up with this. Update soon. :)

That's a nice start you have here guys. I liked the simple summary as well as the first two chapters. The first chapter made me wonder what else you'll make poor Kellin go through and the second one made me wanna know what happened to Callisto that made her hate her cute brother as well as the mystery going on with Callisto's past. Did I mention I love the layout and the banner which looks like a book's cover? The people of the photograph I guess are the twins. You seriously have to keep up with this. Update soon. :)