Oh my gosh!! I spent an hour and a half reading this and I've been completely enthralled!! Please update, I need to know what happens with Ellie and Forrest :)
It's only been 16 days, and you obviously have a life outside of writing and your amazing stories, but I miss them! I keep checking back for updates! I've still got high hopes for Ellie and Forrest :D
I've been sitting here reading for like an hour, completely entranced in this story then being completely crushed when I finally reached the most recent chapter to see no more posted! Waaaaaaa! Also, I've been crying like a moron while reading this, thank you for that ;)
Okay, so I was inlove with Lawless from the moment I found out that Shia Labeouf was in the film (biggest Shia fan ever). I saw the film, read the book, fell inlove with the character of Jack, for obvious reasons. But the character of Forrest grew on me, and now here I am reading a Forrest fiction :P This is perfect, I've never actually read something written so well. You're a really competent writing, and I'm so totally inlove with this story (even though I've only got the chance to read two chapters so far) You're amazing, thank you for writing this!!!! <3
I usually wait for completed stories to read them but you pulled me right in. I absolutely love this!! One of the best on mibba in opinion!! Keep it up and update soon:).
Please don't be a self-conscious author. You could write a story about freaking flamingos and it would still draw me in. You've got an excellent skill that makes characters relatable and enough detail to make the story come to life in my head. Now, I love this story, I don't know how else to say it. I fell in love with your writing when I read Broken, and it was my favorite story for a long while. Seriously, I would reread it over and over again in my downtime. Now with The Sweetest Peach, I just like the characters and story plot so much I can't decide which story I like better! The day it ends will be a devistating one for me xD Keep up the great work!
Another great chapter! The only complaint is that it would be good to have longer chapters. But seriously other than that you're doing a fantastic job! Keep it up please and update soon. I love that they are both still thinking of each other. I also like that you had some time pass by between the last chapter and this one. Nice touch. Can't wait to read more!