In Other Towns and Cities - Comments

Aw, thank you so much! I've been a little busy so I'm going to try and update today!

I am so, so in love with this story that I don't even know where to begin. Your writing is fantastic and the plot line is flawless. I cant wait for the next update, seriously.

@ dream'n.reality.
Aww, thank you! I really appreciate your feedback, it was very reassuring. I just fixed the content box and I totally see what you mean. I'm so glad that you liked it and I can't wait to keep writing. Thanks again! :)

This is a really good story. I like the picture and the back ground. You should make the content box a bit small so the background can peer out more to be seen. It makes the writing look more clean and need. :) I like the pace in the story, it didn't lose my interest. I didn't get to read all of your chapters but I can tell already that you are a good writer, keep at it!

@ amykart
Thank you so much! I'm not completely confident in my writing yet so this was a big ego boost! I just posted another chapter, let me know what you think! Thanks again, you're so sweet!

This was really interesting and I like the plot line. You have really good imagery and I can visualize the story while reading which is awesome. I also love how action-packed this story is. I'm super duper duper excited to see where you're going wih it.