-_- How could you?!? You did it again! Another cliffhanger! Oh my god you are so amazing! I'm not even kidding. You should write some other storied like this.
JesUS CHRIST HOW CAN YOU LEAVE ME HANGING HERE!? Oh my, you're an amazing writer let me tell you! The grammar and vocabulary! And I LOVE that this isn't another original character/band member story! I sobbed when you killed Troy and his girl so hard. I can't even ahahaha please update soon! I'm gonna be sad to part with this too :( I hope you feel better soon! Ps please don't hurt Devin or I'll cry. (But then again I'll probably cry anyway ahahahah) Thanks for sharing this with us!!
You, my friend, are such an ass!!!! ANOTHER FRIGGIGN CLIFFHANGER?!?!?! It just got good! WHY MUST YOU DO THIS TO ME DAMMIT??? I'm sorry, the beginning was rude. You're not an ass. You are an amazing writer that knows how to keep her readers interested and wanting more. I wish I was like that with my writing.
You should write a follow up to it....depending on how you end it, either way.. like an aftermath story... I just like the intensity you put into this, and it's refreshing that you use proper grammar! :]
oh mother! my heart is pouding! Nice job with having Ryan do SOMETHING! In any other MIW fanfic i've read he doesn't get enough credit.!!!!!!!!!!! Can't wait! :)
@ Confettifun Im not sure Chris would take it lightly that some random fan is writing graphic scenes of him being tortured... LOL! They'll probably think I'm psychotic. Anyway, thanks for reading this though! I wouldn't want it to end either but the ending I have planned is definitely going to be MAJOR. I promise not to disappoint
PUH-LEASE dont end this! It would be amazing for them to find chris and we all learn the story of the aftermath! Or chris ends up brain washed when the find him, idk! Please keep it going its so fucking good! Imma see if i can get MIW and Kuza to read this through twitter and tumblr! Its that fucking good.
If any other ideas ever occur to me ill let you know :) thanks for reading