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  • everdeen

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    I missed this story, I'm glad you didn't give up on this. The Imilee's mystery continues... I'm dying to know what happened, if she died or run away or what. Poor Sav, I feel like she's the one trying harder (or wishing more) to fix things.
    July 28th, 2013 at 02:14pm
  • contemplating.you

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    Welcome back, I have missed this story. I saw it updated on my subscriptions and I was like, "WHOA." The chapter was just as lovely as it always is:)

    Honestly, I am really hoping John and Savannah can get their shit together. It would phenomenal to see them work out whatever it is that they are both so clearly regretting. I'm anxious to see if there is a happy ending.

    Also, I am really excited to see how John and herself managed to finally fall in together. I like the chapters where it is a blast into the past, it definitely gives insight as to how everything once was, how everyone changed.

    Keep updating when possible, I love this story:)
    July 27th, 2013 at 05:48pm
  • shay online

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    Oh Autumn, how I miss your updates. I enjoy the darkness of this tale. I'm far too used to happy endings and it's nice for a change. Keep up with the updates dear, I'm on the edge of my seat.
    July 27th, 2013 at 07:49am
  • shay online

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    Take your time updating, love. Whenever it feels right, write. Don't force it, just stay motivated. Good luck with finals if you haven't taken them yet. I'm looking forward to seeing how everything will eventually work out and intertwine.
    June 20th, 2013 at 09:50am
  • K H A L E E S I;;

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    This is just so different. I love the juxtaposition of the two stories and the promise that they will connect and come together. This is really great.

    Only problem, is the font is super tiny and I can't really read it. I don't know if that's something you can or want to fix but otherwise. Update soon!
    June 16th, 2013 at 11:16pm
  • xxJilliann

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    I really am in love with this story. As for FH, it's more flawless than I thought it could be.
    June 13th, 2013 at 01:20pm
  • lovelyhope

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    I don't know what Savannah is complaining about...I wouldn't mind having John being overprotective over me haha.

    I love Forever Halloween! It's so good. I think my two favorite songs are Kennedy Curse and These Four Words.
    June 13th, 2013 at 02:35am
  • daydreamz

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    I like this! Excited for more.
    June 11th, 2013 at 06:55am
  • tessie

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    AHHHHHHHHHHH SO HAPPY YOU UPDATED :D Update soon! Love love love <3
    June 10th, 2013 at 10:48pm
  • everdeen

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    About FH: i love each song of that perfect album. I thought nothing could beat Pioneer and I was wrong, best album they have ever made. My favorite track is always changing, I guess right now is "these four words"
    June 10th, 2013 at 10:32pm
  • everdeen

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    John showing some signs that he likes Sav, awn. I think that Merrick is going to be competition or he's gonna break her heart. Love how this story changes from a secret love (past) to a dark ruined relationship (present), that way we don't feel overwhelmed by the drama and it's not a "silly teen love story" neither.
    June 10th, 2013 at 10:29pm
  • mmsedlak

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    Just keep updating!! I love it!!
    And for forever halloween: I live it all what's not to like? I just feel like there's a meaning to birthday in L.A. that I don't understand
    June 10th, 2013 at 07:06pm
  • liar's lane.

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    I love this. Please update!
    June 7th, 2013 at 11:32pm
  • tessie

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    Omg when are you going to update... I'm having withdrawals :P
    April 21st, 2013 at 09:55am
  • shay online

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    I missed you! Life has been so hectic. I haven't had time to read until now. I love coming back to amazing updates from my favorite authors. I honestly can not describe my feelings toward this story. I need more!
    April 20th, 2013 at 05:44am
  • tessie

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    This is so beautiful... I cannot wait for the next chapter it's going to be great :) Hope you update soon <3
    April 14th, 2013 at 12:09pm
  • everdeen

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    It doesn't matter if it's short, the important is that you updated :) "What a shame we all became such fragile broken things..." i can feel the sadness in this chapter, I hope that their love can overcome this cycle. Did Imilee run away? Was murdered? Idk! I'm so curious! gosh...
    April 13th, 2013 at 06:28am
  • lovelyhope

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    This story makes me so sad yet I love it so much. I just want to know what happened to Imilee/what she did
    April 13th, 2013 at 03:49am
  • blades

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    John O :(
    April 12th, 2013 at 01:31am
  • tessie

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    So perf... the flashback chapters are my faves <3
    April 7th, 2013 at 02:10am