Pitch Black - Comments

Okay that chapter was so fucking good!!!!! Sorry about my swearing. Third person really suits this story well because of all its possibilities and characters. (: AMAZING LOVE

Dayyyummm.
Shit's gettin' real
BTW. I LOVE THIS STORY

Omfg I love this story!!

I missed a whole bunch!! It'd be hysterical if both Blake and Ash's groups got caught and the other one literally did EVERYTHING and saved them all! I think I'd crack the frick up man!!! Hahahah! I loved these past few chapters. So much has happened! Can't wait for more

I knew this was coming. I was told this was coming. Yet I'm still shocked.

omg i knew it!!

oh my god i so should have seen this coming ohmigosh!

I KNEW IT!!!!!!!!!!!!

Omg, SAM!!!

Omg, SAM!!!

Frick!!! What's gonna happen?!?!?? I hope it's nothing too traumatic for baby Sam!!!

Holy shit.

I still really think the woman is their mother. If she isn't, she's the or who killed her parents.

Poor ash. I hope she didn't get bit. Maybe the feeling of your throat being pressed in is a symptom of what happens just after you're bitten. Then again, he didn't take his helmet off, so it's impossible for him to have bitten her. Buuut then again, they've apparently made improvements so that they can last a few seconds in sunlight before combusting, so maybe they've made a way to put their venom in their full blackout suits so they can change humans without having to bite them! Ideas!!!!! Hahah!!

I love this!!! I really cannot wait to see where you'll take it next!

i think the scar lady is blake and ash's mom!!!! :D maybe got bit by her brother and HE didn't know he was bit, or he did and couldn't express it until it was too late. or maybe she always had her hair covering her neck whenever louis came to see her and it takes a few days for the poison to completely affect the blood. i think the vamp lady will inform the other higher ups that there are humans, because bloodlust is stronger than love for your living family because SHE IS THEIR MOTHER!!!!! and of COURSE el is gonna live!! she's freaking EL! and louis's potential girlfriend. and it was ash's work!!

@ Ncgirl1995
Oh well that's always good!!!

The expression of how much i love you cant be put in words. just saying.

How did the others not notice her getting bit on the raid? Wouldn't she stop herself from entering the house as soon as she felt the teeth bite into her?! El!!! Don't die!!!!!!

Perfection. I have no idea what to do in my chapter. Oops.

they shouldn't send out all of their best fighters, it makes me so worried! especially with that last little comment in the author's note!!! :P

oh, it seems like harry's getting a little jealous!!! HMMMMMMMMMM!!!!! (; fun times shall be had i'm sure! yayayayay!!!! loved this!!!

Why you so perfect