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  • SM13

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    This is my new favorite story! The guard is such a creep tho.

    PLEASE update soon! When do u think it will be?
    March 27th, 2013 at 09:34pm
  • gothique4

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    Hmmm methinks Henry the horny piece of shit is gonna create some drama.

    Marissa looks and sounds like a cheap $2 hooker lol

    I had to laugh at greasy ol Marcus - what a desperate little perv.
    March 27th, 2013 at 09:38am
  • xShadows

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    Oh my fucking god this is my new favourite story on this whole website! I demand you update soon :) I absolutely love it!
    March 27th, 2013 at 06:32am
  • HerNameIsAlice

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    Drama bomb!!!
    Marcus and Marissa.
    Danny and Matt being a butthole.
    Best chapter out of many more to come!
    :)
    March 27th, 2013 at 06:22am
  • shortygirl

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    Matt isn't very good at showing his feelings. He likes her but doesn't know how to show it.
    March 27th, 2013 at 06:12am
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    Really like this :) Can't wait for more!
    March 20th, 2013 at 07:40am
  • BeenDownThatRoad

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    I love this so far!! Great concept. What I wouldnt give to be secluded in a cabin with these 5..lol. Frick, Why does Matt have to be such a dick? Im thinking its because she reminds him of someone...cant wait for more!
    March 20th, 2013 at 05:37am
  • purple89

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    brian is such a skeeze!
    i love how she told him: you need to work on your game dude. it's kinda sad.
    this story just keeps getting better and better!!
    March 19th, 2013 at 02:39am
  • batbeautyxx

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    Love.<3
    March 18th, 2013 at 11:57pm
  • gothique4

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    "Well, I'm Jimmy. Sorry about Matt being a dick and Brian being a creepy, horny bastard." Hahahaha Jimmy's summed it up perfectly lol

    Will be interesting to find out what Matt's problem is - I'm thinking instant erection at the sight of her and he's covering it by being a dick lol

    I love how they didn't make a peep after the threat of losing their favourite bits :-)
    March 18th, 2013 at 10:48am
  • HerNameIsAlice

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    This is another one of those stories where I have never read of a plot similiar to it or anything.
    Love the concept and I can't wait for more!
    :)
    March 18th, 2013 at 08:23am
  • VRose

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    I'm liking this concept and a having a more independent girl that doesn't fawn over everything. More please!
    March 18th, 2013 at 06:08am
  • DaniGates

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    Please Kill me! I loved the update! I love Danny. She's such a bad-ass! Jimmy is just too damn cute! Zacky needs more lines in this and I think he is of great weight because it looks sexy as hell on him! Johnny is the short shit that I want to keep in my pocket and never let him see the light of day ever again! Brian is a slutty man-whore in which I adore and want to do naughty, nasty things to one day in my life! And Matt is so bruting and sexy, I can't take it anymore. Frustration of the sexual kind from him! :D PLEASE update as soon as you are able to, PLEASEEEEEEE! :D
    March 18th, 2013 at 06:03am
  • KaylahJ KAM

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    I loved this chapter so fuckin much! Danny is a fuckin boss, she has those guys whipped *insert whip sound*.. I can't wait for the next chapter ^.^
    March 18th, 2013 at 05:34am
  • chelsey_lee

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    I'm in suspense and I can't wait for the next chapter.
    March 18th, 2013 at 05:06am
  • shortygirl

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    Poor Johnny lol he puts up with there teasing.
    Well Matt could've made a better first impersion. Though I wish these updates were a bit longer
    March 18th, 2013 at 04:18am
  • gothique4

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    At first I was a bit iffy about reading about teenage delinquent girls as most of them just need a two by four to the face to grow the hell up, but you write really well and damn Danny has had a hard life.

    At least Tanner's with her Uncle now, but with Danny out of the way I can picture the two skanks stepping up the tormenting of the poor little dude.

    Her meeting the guys is gonna be interesting, as I can see her being her mouthy self and getting bitch slapped.
    March 17th, 2013 at 05:32am
  • DaniGates

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    Hi, my names Daniella and I would like to say, I FUCKING LOVE THIS STORY!!! PLEASEEEEEE Update ASAPPPPPPPPP!!! OR LIKE NOW! Please! PLEASE! Por FAVOR! :DDD Ugh! Love it. Can't wait for more! :D
    March 17th, 2013 at 04:07am
  • heretic.

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    Can't wait to see what happens next! I'd love to be in a cabin with them all! Haha
    March 16th, 2013 at 11:58pm
  • purple89

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    this is really good!! i love your writing style! it's totally engaging and your conversation flow is seamless which is pretty hard to do but you are doing a great job!! can't wait for more!!
    March 16th, 2013 at 11:09pm