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  • disneyland.acid.trip

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    Scheisse. This story, this god dam story. I read it in one sitting and oh, my god. This was amazing, absolutely amazing.
    I love the rawness, I love that everyone has a seperate story and it's all so in depth. I love Danny, so so much. And Tanner, oh man. I see a lot of myself in Danny (despite the criminal part, obviously), everything from the sudden anger and mood changes right down to the way she feels about Tanner. Having a younger sister, I know all too well how protective you can get.
    And I loved the bro moment between Zee and Matt, it made me smile. And Uncle Ray reminds me of my uncle, who's pretty much my hero. It's just, I dunno man. This entire thing was emotional and elegant and raw.
    I honestly couldn't choose which story I like better, between this one and Tough. Which brings me to another point; you're a fantastic author. I absolutely love the way you go about things, and the way you word everything and how complex your characters and plots are. Dude, you're pretty damn amazing, not even gonna lie.
    Anyways, I hope you update soon! I'll start having withdrawls otherwise. ;D
    August 11th, 2014 at 07:50am
  • SleepPatterns

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    @ davygrohlton
    Hi! I'm so glad you enjoy this story! Unfortunately I have put this story on hiatus for now but hopefully I'll be able to come back to it soon. Thanks for leaving a comment. Have a great day :)
    January 27th, 2014 at 11:11pm
  • davygrohlton

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    So I was wondering if you would update this story anytime soon? Because I really love it!
    January 27th, 2014 at 10:28pm
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    @ Daryl Dixon;

    You're welcome! Yes...the Lil Wayne cracked me up as well. :)
    November 7th, 2013 at 07:38am
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    @ Vixyn Of Syn
    Thank you for you're lovely comment! And holy shit! That's hilarious! The M. Shadows costume is amazing but the Lil Wayne made me laugh out loud, haha. Thank you for sharing, dear! :)
    November 6th, 2013 at 12:17pm
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    Such a cute chapter! But man, it's going to be so much harder for Danny to go back a second time after actually getting to be with Uncle Ray, Ash, and Tanner. =/ That little boy broke my heart when he said he wanted her to come home.

    Okay, so this is random, but one of my band guy friends was M. Shadows for Halloween and I just have to share because he looked SO good! (The other guy was Lil Wayne.)

    Image
    November 6th, 2013 at 07:35am
  • Heaven_syn_gates

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    Dawe cute and sad chap
    November 6th, 2013 at 05:01am
  • HerNameIsAlice

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    @ VixonJade11
    Ohh, ok! :)
    September 14th, 2013 at 11:31pm
  • SleepPatterns

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    @ HerNameIsAlice
    Haha, I'm working on a new chapter and my dumbass self accidentally posted it, even though its not finished. It will either be up by tomorrow or Monday :) promise!
    September 14th, 2013 at 11:08pm
  • HerNameIsAlice

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    Did you update or not? :(
    September 14th, 2013 at 09:29pm
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    OMG! I'm sooooo happy! There were too many things to list in this chapter that made me smile...the best one being Shads thinking to himself "Time to see my girl." Gah, he and Danny are perfect together. Love love love! =)
    September 3rd, 2013 at 07:23am
  • DaniGates

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    Let me just crawl under my bed and bawl my eyes out for a moment. Matt gets to get out of that hell hole for a bit. Danny is alive. Zacky and Matt are good. Jimmy is still Jimmy. Brian is still a sexy fucker... and Marissa is still a dirty whore. I loved this update. I wish there was more to it though! I was SO hoping to get my hands on some good gritty details. PLEASE, update as soon as you can! All the motivation and creativity to you my dear. I am throwing it all to you! AH! UPDATE! K! :DDDDDDDDD
    August 30th, 2013 at 06:41am
  • shortygirl

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    I'm glad Zee and Matt made up. I just hope Danny is okay.
    August 30th, 2013 at 02:03am
  • CrazyPebbles21

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    Update soon
    Amazing chapter
    August 30th, 2013 at 01:54am
  • Heaven_syn_gates

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    Hellz yeah awesome chap buttercup
    August 30th, 2013 at 12:52am
  • Star Angel

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    More soon like now
    August 7th, 2013 at 08:46am
  • DaniGates

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    No. NO NO NOOOO! She ain't dying. She gonna liveeeeee! lol! Seriously! I loveee this story. I think it was fantastic! More soon! PLEASE! :D
    August 4th, 2013 at 06:58am
  • CrazyPebbles21

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    Update soon
    August 2nd, 2013 at 11:03am
  • shortygirl

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    Marcus is crazy! Seriously why would he do that shit in front of every body! I like this chapter.
    August 2nd, 2013 at 05:07am
  • RazzyVengeance6661

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    Omg i love this story i just found it. I can't get enough. Please keep it up :D
    August 2nd, 2013 at 02:00am