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  • Alice Verney

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    this was really awesome minus the whole thing of natasha being a bitch but i could imagine it especially with scarjo's portrayal. i love it and cant wait to read the sequel
    January 21st, 2014 at 02:40am
  • LilacFairy-Chu

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    It feels like you rushed that chapter but I like the suprise! Did not see it coming, wish ou gave more detail into how she was feeling and more about things that were going on around, (like at the doctors) anyways! Updae soon! <3 I love this story!
    April 5th, 2013 at 10:02pm
  • Nyx007

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    Bitches who leave me on cliffhangers get stitches. But for real, I'm gonna need and update.....like now.
    April 5th, 2013 at 08:53pm
  • KillJoySynner

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    :O gah! What's Steve gonna say!?! Holy crud! I'm so going to be excited for the next update!:D
    April 5th, 2013 at 06:55pm
  • KillJoySynner

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    :O what?!?!!? kissed who?!?!?! gah! i really wanna know!! Please update soon!
    April 3rd, 2013 at 07:33pm
  • KillJoySynner

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    Omg!!! I was about to cry! Why Clit! Gosh! You have freaking Natasha!
    April 2nd, 2013 at 04:04am
  • LilacFairy-Chu

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    At least there was no "taking advantage"of in that situation, she even said "steve" so he can't be getting the wrong idea right?
    Update soon!
    March 28th, 2013 at 11:33pm
  • JKinzz1

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    I love this story Mr. Green I can't wait to see what happens next!!! Update soon please!!! Very Happy
    March 20th, 2013 at 07:34pm
  • LilacFairy-Chu

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    I was enjoying this! They were being so cute! And then it ended with 'what could possibly go wrong' and when someone says that things go wrong! Why would she say that?? Haha
    Update soon <3 xx
    March 11th, 2013 at 03:26pm
  • LilacFairy-Chu

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    I love how she told Fury off and calld him out on his BS! He really is trying to pull all the strings and she's not having it, she's really Tonys daughter now haha! <3 update soon!! Xx
    March 2nd, 2013 at 02:21am
  • LilacFairy-Chu

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    She didn't exactly tell her mom everythin, I wonder how she would take the whole "super hero" part
    Update soon! :D
    February 24th, 2013 at 09:13pm
  • LilacFairy-Chu

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    Yes! I love the progression of their relationship! And I love that he beat her at the game haha they r cute! Update as soon s u can Wednesday night! <3<3
    February 19th, 2013 at 08:16pm
  • cocopuffs

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    I liked the last chapter and I think it's funny how awkward and sort of scared Tony is of his ex. Can't wait to read the family bonding later on. It's also cute how Steve acts around Alex, and he seems to already have some feelings towards her.
    February 18th, 2013 at 08:34pm
  • LilacFairy-Chu

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    I have to say I'm so glad I decided to read this, its probably my fav so far its great! I love the idea and where the story can go and well... everything, how everyone acts is perfect and Alex is just how I would picture his daughter haha I really loved reading I hope you update soon <3 xx !!!!!
    February 18th, 2013 at 07:00pm
  • cocopuffs

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    I am really loving this story! I like alex's personality and how far her relationship with Steve has come. I feel bad how Tony isn't there for her much. I would like to see a meeting between Tony and her mom and see how they interact with each other. Please, update soon!
    February 17th, 2013 at 08:53pm
  • staceLALA

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    No that's ok. Thank you. I'm having trouble with the layout since Ihaven't made one in a while thank you for telling me this @ Phil's Baby Hina
    February 17th, 2013 at 03:50pm
  • staceLALA

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    No that's ok. Thank you. I'm having trouble with the layout since Ihaven't made one in a while thank you for telling me this @ Phil's Baby Hina
    February 17th, 2013 at 03:50pm
  • wish on a firefly

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    Color scheme of this layout makes the story hard to read (the colors of the text and the background of the content area hurts my eyes). Change the color scheme and everything will be readable. I'm not trying to be mean and I know that I can click the default layout button, but I'd much rather avoid that.
    February 17th, 2013 at 03:24am