this was really awesome minus the whole thing of natasha being a bitch but i could imagine it especially with scarjo's portrayal. i love it and cant wait to read the sequel
It feels like you rushed that chapter but I like the suprise! Did not see it coming, wish ou gave more detail into how she was feeling and more about things that were going on around, (like at the doctors) anyways! Updae soon! <3 I love this story!
I was enjoying this! They were being so cute! And then it ended with 'what could possibly go wrong' and when someone says that things go wrong! Why would she say that?? Haha Update soon <3 xx
I love how she told Fury off and calld him out on his BS! He really is trying to pull all the strings and she's not having it, she's really Tonys daughter now haha! <3 update soon!! Xx
Yes! I love the progression of their relationship! And I love that he beat her at the game haha they r cute! Update as soon s u can Wednesday night! <3<3
I liked the last chapter and I think it's funny how awkward and sort of scared Tony is of his ex. Can't wait to read the family bonding later on. It's also cute how Steve acts around Alex, and he seems to already have some feelings towards her.
I have to say I'm so glad I decided to read this, its probably my fav so far its great! I love the idea and where the story can go and well... everything, how everyone acts is perfect and Alex is just how I would picture his daughter haha I really loved reading I hope you update soon <3 xx !!!!!
I am really loving this story! I like alex's personality and how far her relationship with Steve has come. I feel bad how Tony isn't there for her much. I would like to see a meeting between Tony and her mom and see how they interact with each other. Please, update soon!
Color scheme of this layout makes the story hard to read (the colors of the text and the background of the content area hurts my eyes). Change the color scheme and everything will be readable. I'm not trying to be mean and I know that I can click the default layout button, but I'd much rather avoid that.