Make a Wish - Comments

This was lovely! I realise it is absolutely years old; I found it buried deep in my Tumblr likes. A really sweet lil fluff piece, I very much enjoyed it.

This is super cute :'D

My sister always freaks out about Jalex, but I'm not really an All Time Low fan so I don't follow. However, this was really cute! I've actually seen them live twice before (I took my sister, ha) and you've pretty much got their live shows down to a T. I could almost imagine this happening even if this wasn't a slash. I almost think something is going down between the pair of them from what I've seen in real life, but I digress. I love that you linked the eyelash wish in with the final outcome of this, it was a really cute and lovely touch, especially as it kind of shows that Alex had feelings for Jack even though he didn't show them. Your description was really really lovely, you use all of these tiny little details that may seem redundant but really aren't. Your sentences flow together beautifully as well and this was a real pleasure to read!

I'll be announcing the winners very shortly, so good luck!

*short story contest*
This story was extremely sweet, well-written and somewhat beautiful. I enjoyed reading it very much, and admire your work like I always do.
Sorry for making such a short comment, but I honestly don't have anything else to say. Great work, loved it, addicted to it now, and I hope that you'll keep on writing!
Xx Ninahx

Aww that was really cute! I liked that.

@ x brobeck
Oh, I'm so glad you enjoyed this story! Your comment was just what I needed to hear, so thank you.

“Why are you touching my face?” It was brilliant to use that as a first line; it immediately drew me in. I really love how you described Jack's feelings, realistic and such, and I'm glad it wasn't just angstangstangst like so many other things. The concert portion was wonderful, and I could see it all happening, especially the ghetto fabulous z snap. And of course Alex's little speech in the bunk was fabulously rambling.
Basically this made me smile like an idiot. Fantastic.

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adorable <3

This is absolute perfection <3

This was so cute. c:

perfect :o