Pleasure University - Comments

From comment swap- I'm not a fan of purely sex-driven perverts and so the whole rough sex/no love thing has never been a turn on but only reminds me of men's need to dominate over women. Very animalistic and gross. I thought it was interesting as soon as another girl is involved and his attention is not her she immediately calls him a perverted bastard. Very negative considering how she must understand him to be and yet she still has sex with him. This girl has definitely got issues, but yes dirty hot sex with a cliche schoolgirl theme involving Avenged Sevenfold. I'm sure this gains a lot of readers.

@ JamieAllOver.
LOL don't jump off a bridge!! Thanks for reading lol. I liked writing this story even though there's a tad few mistakes in it but it's one of my favorite works. I appreciate you taking time to check it out.

i just looked
and noticed this didn't place at all
and i read the one that took first place
and lemme just say nah
naH
no
you deserved that nah i'm jumping off a cliff instead
jamie outtie

i'm unsure how i got here honestly since i'm not an a7x fan and i don't know anyone who's an a7x fan or writes/reads the fanfics, but jESUS CHRIST IM SO GLAD I FOUND THIS
hot damn tho
if this didn't take first place in that contest thing then i'm jumping off a bridge

@ Mrs. Shadows
I know right? I'll put it on my to do list. :)

You need to update this now!!!

Holy shit that was sexy (*•*) god damn, I cant eait for more! Now rxcuse me while I go get riddance of this lady boner.

@ xMandiblesx
I do the same so you're not only! ♥

@ On Angel's Wings
Yeah that's true. I guess I just take what people say too personally and it makes me rethink my writing abilities.

@ xMandiblesx
I'm working through your stories as we speak :) ♥ Don't be disheartened, you should write for yourself, if people like it then woohoo but if not you're not writing to please others just yourself!

@ On Angel's Wings
Awww thanks so much! It's awesome to hear you say that. I'm just confused because I wrote this and everyone loved it yet anything new I write is boring or like....not what people want to read. I just don't get it. Thanks for lifting me up though. It means sooo much to me!

:O ermmmm well... Wow! That's all I have! It's very well written and I like the layout! hmmm... I'm definitely interested where this is going!

This is only the first chapter? Come on! I'm just too speechless. And it's kinda funny how they kept getting interrupted. LOL!

Holy crap that was awesome!

I have to admit, I'm not a huge fan of A7X fanfiction. But this, my darling, is excellent so far

It really made me hot and bothered. Please, please, please update soon

Now I know how the Lonely Island feels......great chapter :)

H-O-L-Y-C-R-A-P.
That's all I can say right now. Mr Sullivan, you are welcome in my bed any time you want! Just as long as you promise to do that! Also, those men are extremely good at cockblocking...but nonetheless some of the best smut I have ever read! God, it puts half of my stories to shame, it really does! I can't actually wait for you to update, you must do it soon. Please? Pretty please with naked A7X on top?

Got me so hot and bothered. I love it.

I love it!