The Darkest Storm - Comments

you are a legend.

Hi so comment swap brought me here. I don't watch the walking dead and at first I thought I wouldn't understand this but I did. You actually made me want to watch it even :) I didn't find any spelling mistakes. Keep up the great work!

Very well written. Good job. (:

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I don't watch the walking dead but when reading I didn't really feel that mattered, I didn't find it confusing at all and you write very well with good description. NOOOO not the dog! D: I hate it when animals die :'( And why is it always a German Sheppard?! :'(
Your writing however is amazing and I didn't spot any mistakes, which is always good and your description is amazing I saw everything as it happened which a lot of authors are really bad at! But this was amazing! :D

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I was so surprised to be brought here, and see Daryl's face in the background. I'm not even going to lie, I was grinning like an idiot. xD
Everything about this is perfect. I love it much much more than I should, but I can't help it.
What can I say? I'm a huge The Walking Dead fan. xD
The story line itself is great. I really hope you continue with this. I didn't notice any spelling or grammar mistakes, so great job there. And the layout is simple yet elegant. It's beautiful, much like the story itself. c:
I also loved how you started at the beginning, season one. Most people start at their story with the recent episodes, and have troubles putting their original character into the mix. But you, my friend, are amazing at this. Your original character is fabulous, and I love the small things that you learn to love about Darcy. I was near tears when Jasper died. I could just imagine the look on her face. And her inner-strength is pretty phenomenal.
Overall, this was an amazing story. It's one of the very few TWD stories that are alluring. Your imagery, by the way, was great too. c:
This comment is horrible, I just didn't know how to say everything I wanted. xD

Comment Swapper here: Okay hai, how are you? :D Never watched Walking Dead, and I'm really scared of zombies, so I'm going to be honest and say I only read the first chapter. Your prose and your grammar are great, and I don't think I found any spelling errors. So good for you! :) I also love the background you chose, as well as your font. Great job and keep writing@!

You stick to the story line really well.
I love this show and this is the best TWD fic I've read. PHENOMENALLLL.

I love how your doing this story so far even thigh it's only the first 2 chapters.....I can't wait until you update

uhuhuhuhuh you start waaaaay back at the season 1, that's new for me. Well done :)

I think it's really good for a first chapter. Usually dont get to the last part when i dont like a fic, but this is pretty cool. Cant wait to the next update.