Another comment swap even though you've already gotten like, 4! At first I thought that it was a little I eventful and Harry was just going on about some chick he used to know but it's the end that definitely gets you! Powerful last paragraph
Hi! I'm from comment swap. Holy moly that was intense. I loved how you made Harry so broken and relatable. He's a character I felt sympathetic to. Your writing was amazing :) I really enjoyed being able to see into Harry's head, he's a great unique character
Hi! I'm from comment swap. Holy moly that was intense. I loved how you made Harry so broken and relatable. He's a character I felt sympathetic to. Your writing was amazing :)
Hey Comment Swap here ^^! Now I agree with Lyical_Miracle down below; I also have no interest in One Direction. However the writing was so verdant and descriptive that the reader doesn't need that. I love the differentiation of memories and the present; it's clear and well done. I think I may read the sequel as well !
This was incredible. I'm not the slightest bit interested in One Direction, but with the last paragraph, it wouldn't matter. This could definitely be kept a one-shot and be one of the best stories I've read on Mibba. I love the details you put into this, I love the flashbacks, and I love the surprise of Harry not being in the band anymore because of how bad he's become from losing such an important love. I just want to read this over and over again. Thank you for writing this!
At first I thought that it was a little I eventful and Harry was just going on about some chick he used to know but it's the end that definitely gets you! Powerful last paragraph