Oh my gosh...that ending! Wow...I'm quite physically speechless at this, it was amazing! I like how you used a flashback rather than just writing about the crash itself, I could feel myself tearing up at the idea of my beloved Synacky being torn apart, it's just so sad! Good job for the first entry to the contest- thank you so much for joining :)
omg... so sad...I read the last part like 3 times I thought Brian had lived and Zack had died but it was the other way around.. omg.. I cried during it.. This.. I love this so much.. your such an amazing writer.. I dont have anything to say then amazing. awesome.sad. heart breaking.. This is the best second story I have read the first is your other one that I love so much.. I love this story so much.. its so good.. <3 and this is not a lie.. I fucking love this... <3
Thank you so much. I tried to make it so you thought Brian lived so I guess it worked c: