Ooh I am sensing some tension in the air. So tense you cannot cut it with a knife. The drama is about to unfold I can feel it in my bones. Nicely done. Spot on job. Cannot wait for more.
I have to say this story is amazing. You had me hooked from the first chapter. Truly awesome. Beautiful I cannot wait to read the next chapter. Very nicely done.
So, I love that you made Nayeli a fucking dominatrix because you don't see that in stories like ever! I love that Chris doesn't know either. Usually it's the man in the relationship that hides things but I love how the roles are reversed here. It's awesome and I'm really excited to get further into this story. :)