Destroyed Castle - Comments

Here from the comment swap!

You've got a couple of spelling and tense errors scattered about (i.e. using "threw" instead of "through"), but they're nothing a quick editing session can't fix. Other than that, I think you've got an interesting idea going here, and it should be fun to see where everything ends up. I'm especially fond of the stage name "Aubrey Star" lol.

Hope you're able to carry on with the plot the way you've intended to!

comment swap, I reall enjoyed reading this. The layout and paragraphs are neat and I couldn't see any spelling or gramar mistakes which is a huge plus. I really like th story line and characters introduced so far, your descriptions are perfect and no id your style. I'm looking forward to read more so I'll rec and sub because this is truely a gift from comment swap. :) Kepp writing.

I really like the story line so far. You did a great job keeping my attention with your writing style. The lay out looks great and its easy to read. The spacing makes it look nicer as well as easier to keep track of where you are. The places you decided to break the paragraphs also flows very well. I'd love to read more and don't mind if the updates aren't so frequent. Excellent work so far!