Taking a Chance - Comments

  • orangemonk

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    I'm sorry i haven't commented more but you know how real life can be...that being said, i was heartbroken to read the last few chapters. The sex, separation and break up is so sad. Can't wait for the sequel and hopefully good news.
    March 30th, 2013 at 07:57pm
  • maggiemay1320

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    Ahh cliffhanger! Cant wait for part 2 (:
    March 30th, 2013 at 10:33am
  • Missand

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    Glad you're enjoying lol
    March 28th, 2013 at 07:38pm
  • carness123

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    i love it, that was brilliant lol
    March 28th, 2013 at 07:30pm
  • carness123

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    well wow....
    March 26th, 2013 at 11:42pm
  • Missand

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    You did ask for more ;)
    March 25th, 2013 at 06:17pm
  • carness123

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    woman you really are cruel, more please... PLLLEEEEAAAAAASSSSSSEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!! Very Happy
    March 25th, 2013 at 05:50pm
  • groovymaz

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    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE DONT MAKE ME AN ALCHOLIC... I CANNOT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPETER>>> THIS IS SO DAMM HOT>> I CANT BARE IT!!!!!!!
    March 25th, 2013 at 11:57am
  • carness123

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    please miss can we have some more? *smiles hopefully*
    March 24th, 2013 at 01:18am
  • U2_Magnificent76

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    MORE PLEASE! This is one of my favourite fan fictions! Can't wait for the next hope it will be up super soon!!!
    March 24th, 2013 at 12:33am
  • iwabbit

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    this chapter was cute
    March 22nd, 2013 at 08:35pm
  • carness123

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    hey i luvs you for this story but that was un fair leaving it like that*frowns playfully*, please update fast... pretty please with a cherry on top.
    March 22nd, 2013 at 06:01pm
  • groovymaz

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    I think this story is amazing.. I dont usually read but I find myself coming home and having to check if hte new chapter is up... there are so many angles this story can take which is what i love about it!!!! Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy
    March 21st, 2013 at 10:22am
  • nicoleharris88

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    I really love this story. But I find myself constantly forgetting that they were friends for a long time prior to getting together, thus when the sweet nothings flow, it screams a little too easy. Not that I don't like it, I just need to remember that they were friends for a while. I was happy to see that even after she pushed him away, they were able to briefly discuss what was wrong. I hope they can work through it cause lets me honest, sexy scenes are fun to read lol. I am curious how things will work out for the relationship while he is away. As it said, she is wondering how she will cope without him being there. I personally feel like she isn't going to cope well, but that's an outside opinion. We shall see hopefully :D You know I love your stories.
    March 21st, 2013 at 02:37am
  • carness123

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    awww, I love your story, keep it going... PLLLEEEEAAAAAASSSSSSSEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Very Happy
    March 20th, 2013 at 11:57pm
  • SkyyWarr

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    Im digging this ^.^
    Keep writing.
    March 20th, 2013 at 06:38pm
  • orangemonk

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    I'm so into this story! Please keep up the good work...and thanks for giving Jeremy some relief finally.
    March 18th, 2013 at 01:34am
  • maggiemay1320

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    Loving the story (: Cant wait to see the next update!
    March 17th, 2013 at 09:59am
  • groovymaz

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    JEEEEEZZZ woman you can let us hang like this... NOOOOOO.. Cant wait another 24 hours.. I love this story becuse is not your typical smut it takes its time.. keep it up!@!!!! =)
    March 15th, 2013 at 03:05am
  • groovymaz

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    OMG OMG this is an amazing story!!!
    March 14th, 2013 at 02:41am