Dun dun dun indeed. I really love this story. It's just so interesting & you write it so well. It makes me want more & for you to just keep updating every few hours, but I know that'd be really hard to do haha. I can't wait until the next update!
So short ;~; I was hoping to learn more, but that's fine. The fact that Oliver (I'm actually gonna just start using the seperate names) isn't completely sure what he was gonna do though is interesting. The heat of the moment sometimes makes everyone have half bait plans. I wonder what Tom & Jaylene talked about in the hallway? I can't wait until the next update!!
It was cool hearing more from Oli ;) I also have two predictions at this point: Jaylene tries to help Oliver because she's failing for him and wants to help him get rid of Oli, maybe therapy? Or she starts something with Tom and Oli DOES NOT like that! Can't wait to find out how this story unfolds!
Oh noez! Well, I wonder what Tom's role in all of this is. I hope he can clear some things up so she doesn't think he's completely evil because Oli isn't! Just his other personality even if he's actually pretty sexy. Oh poor Oli...I can't wait until the next update!
This story sounds so fantastic & interesting! As bad as it sounds, I love it when Oli has mental illnesses because he's always so awesome & still extremely sexy. I can't wait until the next update! :D