June 13th, 2013 at 08:18am
Smile and Promise - Comments
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Yayayayyay, love this story so much! Hope you continue soon, can't wait. :) Love yaJune 10th, 2013 at 07:31pm
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Yay!April 7th, 2013 at 07:49am
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Ugh, Jaime and Valeria are so freaking cute! But cuteness aside, I really hope the tour doesn't put a strain on their relationship.April 2nd, 2013 at 04:22am
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Sweet :)April 2nd, 2013 at 12:00am
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Well, I can't say I'm not TOTALLY FREAKING HYPED FOR THIS FIC. Just thought you should know ;)March 31st, 2013 at 10:27am
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Can't wait for the nest update :)March 27th, 2013 at 05:00am
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I didn't even realize I missed an update of this. Sorry about that!
But ugh, Jaime and Valeria are so adorable together. The scene with them playing around at the beach was super cute, and made me wish I could splash around in the ocean with a cute boy. And then you had to hit me right in the feels at the end of the chapter with Valeria talking about people leaving her. Are you trying to kill me, woman?!
Update this soon, please!March 18th, 2013 at 02:20am -
Well, Shane seems like a lovely gent. How rude of him to try to ruin Jaime and Valeria's date!
It was so cute how Jaime defended Valeria's honor when Shane was being a jerk. And Odin is a good dog for growling at that asshole.
Since this story is just starting out, I don't really have much of a prediction of what is going to happen next. I do have the feeling that whatever does happen, some of it's going to involve Shane.February 28th, 2013 at 06:10am -
I'm going to live through Valeria in this story, because she is basically me, with cooler hair and Jaime's attention. That phone call was exactly how it would have gone if I was in her place.
I'm so excited to read about their date!February 22nd, 2013 at 11:49pm -
Aww!! It's really cute!!! Continue!!!February 20th, 2013 at 08:02am
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this is so cute :) love it!!!February 20th, 2013 at 05:50am
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Oh my God, this is so cute! I'm pretty sure anything involving Jaime could be considered cute, given how adorable he is. I love how he just put himself out there and went after the girl he fancied. You go, Jaime!
Valerie had better not break her promise! I would absolutely love to be in her shoes right now, lucky girl.February 20th, 2013 at 04:12am
Thanks babe! This will come back as soon as I finish You're The One Who Shot Me. Stay tuned and stay beautiful. ♥