@ HappyReader Thanks for the comment! I'm glad you like my word choice! I just think that saying 'said' is just so...Bland. I plan to add a chapter about the events before this one, tomorrow. :)
I like this story you wrote as a stand alone. Of course, you can expand it as you wish, I'm sure it will be amazing, but I am jealous of your use of the word other than said. I know that sounds really lame or something like that, but it is so much easier to hear the tone when another word is used than said. As for the storyline, my mind is going wild looking at all the possibilities that could happen after this! Keep writing! ♥