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  • HappyReader

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    I am still loving this story! Please keep writing!!! :)
    March 11th, 2013 at 04:04am
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    @ HappyReader
    Thanks for the comment! I'm glad you like my word choice! I just think that saying 'said' is just so...Bland.
    I plan to add a chapter about the events before this one, tomorrow. :)
    March 6th, 2013 at 07:54am
  • HappyReader

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    I like this story you wrote as a stand alone. Of course, you can expand it as you wish, I'm sure it will be amazing, but I am jealous of your use of the word other than said. I know that sounds really lame or something like that, but it is so much easier to hear the tone when another word is used than said. As for the storyline, my mind is going wild looking at all the possibilities that could happen after this! Keep writing! ♥
    March 6th, 2013 at 05:20am