Natural Born Killers - Comments

kim wonshik. (2255)

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I think this story has a lot of potential. The character has an interesting background, and it makes me want to know more about her. And damn it, she's good at kicking ass. Jake didn't stand a chance!

Meeting Brian is going to be so interesting!

I noticed that there were a few grammatical errors here and there, but everyone makes them. Great job on this! :)

September 29th, 2013 at 10:37pm

synful_desires (100)

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I have this feeling in me that was Brian who kill her parents...

Can't wait for more, I'm very excite for this new story!

May 19th, 2013 at 11:09pm

Quoth Raven (100)

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I'm a little late, but this story is already turning out to be wonderful! Great job!

May 13th, 2013 at 07:06pm

shortygirl (100)

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Really liking this so far! She can kick some ass. I love the banner too.

May 13th, 2013 at 05:45am