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  • kim wonshik.

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    I think this story has a lot of potential. The character has an interesting background, and it makes me want to know more about her. And damn it, she's good at kicking ass. Jake didn't stand a chance! tehe Meeting Brian is going to be so interesting! XD I noticed that there were a few grammatical errors here and there, but everyone makes them. Great job on this! :)
    September 29th, 2013 at 10:37pm
  • synful_desires

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    I have this feeling in me that was Brian who kill her parents...

    Can't wait for more, I'm very excite for this new story!
    May 19th, 2013 at 11:09pm
  • Quoth Raven

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    I'm a little late, but this story is already turning out to be wonderful! Great job!
    May 13th, 2013 at 07:06pm
  • shortygirl

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    Really liking this so far! She can kick some ass. I love the banner too.
    May 13th, 2013 at 05:45am
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