February 27th, 2013 at 05:47am
Suicidal Recital - Comments
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This was very, very good. And I totally got that she'd killed her personality. Brilliant, and powerful. You're awesome;)February 27th, 2013 at 05:44am
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@ XXXataktoulaXXX
Okay, thanks! I appreciate all the suggestions.February 22nd, 2013 at 07:56pm -
Dear author, that was nice for a one-shot but it would be better if you added more details to give off the feeling Ariel killed her personality because if I didn't read it at the author's note I wouldn't have known. I liked the story's title and how this was written. Just a suggestion but you could use bold text at the mention of They. It would seem better I think. ~Marian.February 22nd, 2013 at 07:51pm
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Dear author, that was nice for a one-shot but it would be better if you added more details to give off the feeling Ariel killed her personality because if I didn't read it at the author's note I wouldn't have known. I liked the story's title and how this was written. Just a suggestion but you could use bold text at the mention of They. It would seem better I think. ~Marian.February 22nd, 2013 at 07:51pm
You're makin me feel like a superhero, darling. Enough with the lovely compliments before my too-big head explodes