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  • RecklessPaperHeart

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    I really like this! I like that you`re basing it off Sarah by Tyler the Creator, it`s a good idea!!
    I don`t know if you`ve noticed, but in the second chapter you put Lucy instead of Sarah a couple times.
    February 22nd, 2013 at 11:34pm
  • gh0st-writer

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    i actually really like this so far omg
    February 22nd, 2013 at 10:40pm
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