Finally some interaction! I'm really happy about it! I like how they're both so confused, it's just great :D but she needs to wake uppppp! although I am curious to their weekly talks, hehe! Update soon!
I'm so glad you updated, I actually dreamt about this story last night? Which is pretty weird. Anyway, this was such a great update - I just love Harry in this story, he seems so innocent and it's cute! Great chapter! Onto the next one, yeah? :D Update soon
So I just read the first chapter and I am absolutely in love with this... I've giggled, I've had my hands in my hair... basically I've been feeling all the emotions and the awkwardness... you write it all so well, it's impossible not to feel like I'm somewhat a part of it. It is so well written, wow. I wish I could keep reading and reading and there would be no end to this story, sadly you only have a couple of chapters written so far... if I could I'd read all of them now but I have to go, which is super frustrating because it is really an amazing story I JUST WANNA READ! Really... great, great story and I can't wait to see what happens next!
The layout is gorgeous and so is that picture of Harry. Yum. This is what I think I love the way you write, it flows together and it makes sense, like, the paragraphs aren't random, like how mine are. But I love me some Harry stories and if they're good and interesting, I'm all for it...and this is both good and interesting! UPDATE?!
I like the layout, but I feel like it's a little wide, and it can be annoying for others to read. Perhaps you could try to shorten the width of the content? Otherwise, that gif of Harry is just, ugh, perfection.
The first chapter is really interesting so far, you don't tend to read many stories where the first chapter starts with the main female character dying, so I thought that was a good way to peak my interest. I loved when Louis told Harry to take his shirt off and use his body to create heat, especially with Harry's reaction. Your description of Anya falling was done really well and it was so realistic too. Moving onto the other chapters, I was surprised to read that Anya and Harry can hear each other, and I'm excited to see how this plays out as I read future chapters! Subbing
I read this already! And obviously I forgot to comment... whoops.
Anyway, the first chapter is what really gets me hooked. Even just as simple word change from "sink" to "descend" was so noticeable and fresh. Your description was rich but to the point, you didn't take ten minutes to describe a scene or feeling. I loved that about it, and your characters seemed realistic, not to mention you left questions unanswered which made me want to read on, not just for the purpose of the story.
I honestly love this and I can't wait to finish it and continue! Thank you so much for the recommendation!